Wednesday, August 10, 2011

What should I name my story?

Okay, so in the story a goth-ish guy, Seth, is picked to save the world from the apocalypse. His best friend Jamie turns out to be an angel sent to protect and watch him. He gets to heaven to train with his army to save the earth and is vehemently denying he's the chosen one and all that. Turns out no one can train him because he's so strong so they get a special trainer who teaches Seth to control his powers. He ends up being really great friends with these 3 people; a guy in his old training group, his trainer, and the other really powerful girl being trained. Well, the guy he becomes great friends with dies while fighting with a guy who can control fire, and Seth decides that he doesn't want to save the earth anymore and runs off to the woods to quote "get eaten by bears or something." Well, his trainer comes and teaches him how to control the element of spirit even though he doesn't have enough control of his powers yet, so he can talk to the guy. And then the spirit of the guy tells him to fight for him so he does, and ends up training a lot with the other powerful girl. They fall in love and all that cliche stuff. And then, the date of the apocalypse comes, and Seth has to fight the leader of the evil causing the apocalypse. Not 10 minutes before they fight, the leader fatally wounds the girl Seth loves. So Seth gives her a last kiss as she dies, and is majorly pissed off. He destroys the evil in a brutal fashion, and it ends happily ever after. The last scene is Seth and his trainer (being two of the few surviving main characters) burying the dead, and Seth has a heartbreaking monolouge at the end. It's crappy, I know, I'm not planning on publishing, just writing it while I'm grounded so I don't die of boredom. I need a title, and any pointers or suggestions or constructive critisism you have is welcome. Don't be a douche, I have fragile self esteem. Thanks in advance!

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